tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8404522036717020892.post4606036696372411246..comments2023-04-05T08:50:31.651-05:00Comments on the imperfect momma: ConnectionsLeahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10244312683557998844noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8404522036717020892.post-82186893714772787482011-04-19T23:00:02.354-05:002011-04-19T23:00:02.354-05:00so well written, and I could see so much of it so ...so well written, and I could see so much of it so clearly even though I was not an athlete. I agree with Lizz about being so angry that you were displaced.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06666555088992266185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8404522036717020892.post-9334937723078423212011-04-19T21:57:29.123-05:002011-04-19T21:57:29.123-05:00Ooh... I hate nepotism and the like so much, my bl...Ooh... I hate nepotism and the like so much, my blood boils for your softball career that should have been, all those hours lost to practice! This is really well written, my only thing is this line: "As I thrust my arms up in the air and rocketed the ball towards the batter" When I picture someone thrusting their arms up in the air, it's more of a "this is a stick up" pose than the movement of a fastpitch pitcher... other than that, I really enjoyed this!Lizzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06817883712446293753noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8404522036717020892.post-88297730247152843782011-04-19T11:20:22.506-05:002011-04-19T11:20:22.506-05:00I love how this is written. Such a bummer of a lif...I love how this is written. Such a bummer of a life lesson though.tracyhttp://sellabitmum.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8404522036717020892.post-43013924953564788602011-04-19T10:23:39.591-05:002011-04-19T10:23:39.591-05:00Love this!Love this!Neelyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09374502740607738417noreply@blogger.com